Korean Political History I: Chapter 4, Exercise 2 — Possible Solution ====================================================================== TASK "About 3 million people died in the Korean War." Identify what is imprecise and rewrite. WHAT IS IMPRECISE - 3 million is the upper end of the civilian range (1.6 to 3 million), not a total for all deaths. - Military deaths are given separately (about 600,000 to 630,000). - The source calls the estimates heavily disputed, so a single number overstates the certainty. - The sentence does not say which side, or what is counted. REWRITE "Estimates of deaths in the Korean War are heavily disputed: about 600,000 to 630,000 military deaths and between 1.6 and 3 million civilian deaths, including 137,899 South Korean and 36,515 US military dead or missing." RULE Give each category and its range, name the source type, and do not quote a single total.